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Titanic Chapter 1 A new life

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(Ariel)

I sat in the car, and was waiting for my life should begin. Well I thought it was my life I saw… but instead it feels like I'm a prisoner in my own world. My name is Ariel Athena Triton, I'am suppose to get marry with a very wealthy man named Gaston Hockley, he was my dream, my mom use to tell me… but to be honest I don't think she's right.
"We are here!" My mother suddenly said. Then I got out of our car and looked up to, see that ship that was going to changes my life.
"I don't see what all the fuss is about. It doesn't look any bigger than the Mauretania." I said unimpressed, I didn't really care what kind of ship I was going with… it wouldn't stop my engagement. Sadly.

"You can be blase about many things, Ariel, but not about titanic." My "Fiancée" said. I looked away from him, and began to walk into the ships input. "Your daughter is much hard to impress, Gothel."
Gothel is my mother, she had black hair, long red dress and a little, what I would call a flower power hat.
"Of course she's my daughter. So this is the ship they say is unsinkable?" Mom said when she took her son in law arm.
"It is unsinkable, god himself couldn't sink it." Gaston said with pride in his voice. "We'd better hurry ladies."

While they were going, a boy with his father was running fast behind them, which made Gaston almost fall backwards. He was furious and began to yell at them. My mother on the other side told him to calm down.
"Gaston, remember if we just had come a little bit earlier we wouldn't had needed all this rushing."
"At any rate, it was my darling fiancée's beauty rituals which made us late." I could see his icy eyes looked blameful at me.
"You told me to change." I defended myself. He shook his head and carried on with his pride walking.

The ship was calling the ship of dreams, which it was for everyone beside me. For me it was a slave ship, taking me back to America in chains. Outside I was everything a brought up well girl should be, but inside… I was screaming. And the suddenly I heard the departure warning.

(Jim)

It was almost a day like other, beside that I knew, if I won this game, me and my friend Aladdin would changes our life. Yes we could get on Titanic. A man named Sven bet his and his friend Olaf's tickets. They spooked another language, but it sounded like they had an argument.

"Jim you are passo you bet all we have." Aladdin said.
"When you got nothing, you got nothing to lose." I told him.
"Hit me again, Sven." I said. We played porker, it seemed even, but who will win?
We all looked so serious, like we wanted to die or something like that.
"Okay, the moment of truth. Somebody's life is going to changes." First I asked Aladdin to show his cards.
"Niente."
"Olaf? Nothing! Sven?" When Sven showed his cards, I couldn't help but smirked inside, and sounded sad.
"Oh… two pair,,, I'm sorry Aladdin." I looked at my friend, who was yelling up about what a big passo I was, for the once who doesn't know, does it means fool or idiot.
"I'm sorry you're not going to see your mother for long time." Aladdin looked confused at me. "Cause we are going to America! Full House boys! Whohoo!"  Both me and Aladdin Jumped of happiness, but suddenly Olaf took my shirt and lifted his left arm, I squeezed my eyes together, as I thought he was going to punch me, but instead he hit his own friend.  

"I'm going home!"
"Capito? I go to America!"
"No mate." And old bartender man in the middle of the fifties. "Titanic goes to America. In five minutes." He pointed at the clock, and he was right!
"Shit! Come on Al!"

We ran like crazy between the peoples. I'm not kidding we almost got run over by a horse carriage, but we just laughed when we ran in front of it.
"Jim You is a passo!"
"Maybe but I got the tickets!"
When we finally came to big ship, we saw that the little bridge was going to be taking away. "Stop! We are passages!"
"Have you been checked?" asked the door man.
"Of course! But we don't have lice; we are Americans both of us." First he looked skeptical at us, but then told us it was okay to get on board. And so we did, we ran and jumped all the way down the corridor. "We're the luckiest sons of bitches in the world, you know that!?" I shouted like crazy. I mean this was real! We kept running up to the deck, and I begin to scream goodbye and I would miss them.

"You know somebody?" Aladdin asked dumbfounded.
"The only one I know is you, but that's not the point." I kept waving and then my friend began to do it too.
After all that rush we walked down to room on third class. I saw two other men, which we were going to share room with. As I said hallo to them, Aladdin took the top on the bunk. "Who say you get the top, huh?" I gave some stroke on his stomach, but he just laughed at me.

(Ariel)

Okay to say it right away, I love arts, which got no logics, but still there's feeling in them. Just like Picasso. His pictures are amazing like they had been in a dream or something. Gaston meant that he never amount to a thing. He was just happy that he got cheap. But I liked them, special because I thought, in that room I was going to sleep in needed some new colors. Really believe me, the colors was red, and I think that my hair is red enough be itself.  

(Jim)

Me and Aladdin we got outside at the ship and ran over to the backside of it, and leaned far over the railing. It was amazing to see all those Dolphins jump up and down.
"I can already see the Statue of Liberty." Aladdin told. "Very small of course."  I began to laugh, so I stood up, took my arms on each side and yelled with my lungs craft.
"I'M THE KING OG THE WORLD!!!! WHOHOOOOO!!!"
It was a new adventure. Who knew what was going to happen?
here you go! The first chapter! :D Hopfully you like it :)
As you can see I used some of the last names. Sorry Ariel was supposed to be named Ariel darling Triton, but since the captain name is Triton, I couldn't do it ;)

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Ariel, Jim, Aladdin, Gaston and Gothel (c) disney
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:faint: Disney just became real! Good job!